Saturday, March 31, 2012

Astrid Maxxim Paperback


I just approved the 8x10 paperback format for Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike.  You can purchase it right here from the blog, and hopefully soon you will find it at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and other online sellers of paper books.

I don't expect to sell many paperbacks, but I thought it should be available to help the visibility overall.  I expect to get paperbacks of all the rest of the books out this summer.  I chose 8x10 because it worked best with the cover art and it was different.  This is a kid's book, so I thought it was fine to stand out from my other books.

Friday, March 30, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Cissy


When I wrote the Drache Girl, I place a fairly prominent aborigine character in the story-- Cissy.  I didn't have anything from her point of view though, so when I went back and wrote the prequel, The Dark and Forbidding Land, I put parts of it from her point of view.  This really fleshed her and the other lizzies out a bit.  Quite a few lizzie characters play parts in the story and here are a few of them.

Ssissiatok (Cissy) becomes Yuah's dressing maid-- making her the dressing maid of a former dressing maid.  Cissy more than any other lizzie identifies more with the humans than her own kind.  This is because she was always treated as an outsider by her own people.

Hekheesiatu (Kheesie) is another dressing maid in the Dechatagne home.

Tissonisuk (Tisson) becomes the major-domo for the Dechantagne home.  He is a fairly respected elder among the lizzies in the colony.

Sirruk (Sirruk) is a butler.  He's a spear-carrier character-- frequently present, though not vital.

Thursday, March 29, 2012

Update: The Young Sorceress


I just finished the first revision of Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 4: The Young Sorceress, and it is back from the beta readers.  As I write this, I'm listening to the audio proofreading version.  It should be ready to go to Smashwords by the end of the weekend. 

I also just finished a new revision of Book 5: The Two Dragons.  I'm getting pretty excited about getting them done.  It goes to the beta readers next.  There are a few changes to book 5 based on what happened in book 4 and rewrote the epilog entirely.

Wednesday, March 28, 2012

Port Dechantagne Map


Port Dechantagne is the main setting for Senta and the Steel Dragon.  This is how appears in Book 3: The Drache Girl.

Key:
1. Seventh and On Half Avenue
2. Militia Base
3. Dock Area
4. Shipping Offices
6. Augustus P. Dechantagne Park
7. Cemetary
10. Animal Pens
12. Town Square
13 Finkler's Bakery and others
14. Mrs. Bratihn's Dress Shop, Pfennig Store, Mr. Darwin's
16. Senta's Neighborhood
23. Dechantagne Estate and Others
25. Zaeri Town (The Hertlings)
29. Train Station
30. Recently Cut Forest

Tuesday, March 27, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Aalwijn Finkler




She turned and went back into the store.  Senta took a swig of her Billingbow’s and looked across at the construction of the bakery.  A boy only a few years older than her was directing several grown men working on the project. 

“Do you know that boy?” asked Miss Lusk, coming back outside.

“That’s Aalwijn Finkler.  I guess he wants to make sure that his mom’s bakery is put together right.” 

Miss Lusk had apparently gone back in the store for a straw, which she now stuck into the top of her soda bottle and daintily sipped from.  Noticing the girl looking at her, she said, “I never learned to swig.”

They both heard a commotion across the square at the same time and turned back to the bakery.  Aalwijn Finkler and the men working with, or for him had stopped what they were doing and were speaking loudly, though Senta could only catch a few of their words.  The subject of their discussions soon became apparent though as a line of some forty lizzies came walking into the square from the south.  A sole militiaman, armed with a rifle slung haphazardly over his shoulder accompanied them.

The workmen went back to their hammering, but Aalwijn Finkler hopped down from the construction site and skipped across the square just in front of the line of lizardmen, who were moving so slowly in the cold weather that it looked to Senta as though they were suffering the effects of a slow spell.  The young man walked up to the woman and the girl.

“Hey Senta,” he said.

“Hey.”  Senta took another swig of soda.

“Um… Hello Miss Lusk.”

“I’m flattered that you know me, Mr. Finkler,” said Miss Lusk smiling.

“Oh, everyone knows you, Miss Lusk,” Aalwijn said, not registering the fact that she knew his name.  “I suppose you’ll be heading over to the base after this lot.”

“Why would you suppose that?” wondered Senta.

“These are the lizzies that are going to be the household servants,” explained Aalwijn.  “I expect you’ll need quite a few for that fine house of yours.”

“My home won’t be ready for a few weeks yet,” said Miss Lusk. 

“Someday I’m going to have a house like yours.  Then my mother and I can take it easy and we’ll have dozens of lizzies to wait on us.”

“I’m sure you will.  I’ll tell you what.  When my home is completed, I’ll have both of you over to tea.”  She smiled at the two young people.  “In the meantime, I’m on my way back to my apartment, so I must say adieu.”

“Good day Miss,” said Aalwijn.
“Bye,” said Senta.

Alwijn is another minor character who shows up again and again in Senta and the Steel Dragon.  He's one of the Zaeri that arrive in the colony from Freedonia and with the help of his mother's cooking, he becomes one of the most successful.  I was looking for unusual names when I found Aalwijn.  I think it fits him.

Monday, March 26, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Egeria Lusk



Miss Lusk glided across the snowy square and Senta followed, watching the swaying motion of the woman’s fashionably large bustle.  It was just about large enough that Senta and another ten year old could have hidden themselves under it.  Miss Lusk’s bright red coat was cut wide at the bottom to expand and encompass her very large lower half.

“That’s a great dress,” remarked Senta.  “You must have a huge hip bag under there.”

Miss Lusk glanced over her shoulder and winked.  “All part of the price of fashion.  I’m afraid that without the proper foundation I just don’t have the necessary shape.”

“I don’t think anybody has a bottom that big,” said Senta.

“No.  Nobody does.”  Miss Lusk stopped to pull open the door of the Pfennig Store.  “And nobody walks around on their toes either, but we wear high-heels to look like we do.”

Senta stepped inside the door as the bell hanging above it jingled.  Miss Lusk followed and the bell jingled again as the door closed.  Mr. Parnorsham looked up from behind the counter where he was rearranging costume jewelry in the glass case.  He squinted through his bifocals and wiped his hands on his white apron. 

“Good day ladies.”

“Good day Mr. Parnorsham.”  Miss Lusk politely feigned interest in the costume jewelry.  “I’m in need of some two inch lace today.”

“Let me show you what I have.”

Senta wandered over to look at the toy counter.  It was a small twenty four inch square counter divided into six inch square compartments, each with a different type of toy.  There were rubber bouncing balls, toy guns, tin soldiers, doll sized tea cups with saucers, and wooden ponies with yarn tails.  Senta picked one up and made a horse noise by blowing air between her lips.

“That’s just the one I need,” said Miss Lusk from the other aisle.

“How much is the toy horse, Mr. Parnorsham?” called Senta.

“It’s a toy pony and it’s five pfennigs.  Oh, by the way Miss Lusk, I just got in some more tins of butter biscuits.  I know how much you like them.”

“Yes I’ll take one of those too.”

“Just one?”

“Just one,” she peered around the aisle at Senta and whispered loudly.  “I won’t need that bustle if I keep eating these.  Aren’t you a bit old for a toy pony?”

“It’s for Bessemer.  He’s been playing with my doll lately and I’m afraid he’s going to bite her head off.”

“Do you have five pfennigs?”

“Yeah.  I just don’t know if I want to spend them.  I guess I will though.”  She picked up the wooden pony and brought it to the counter.

“That will be seventy five P, Miss Lusk.”

“We’ll have two of those as well,” said Miss Lusk, pointing at a large framed picture of a brown bottle emblazoned with the words “Billingbow’s Original Sarsaparilla and Wintergreen Soda Water.”  Then she winked again at Senta.

“Well that will bring you total to ninety seven P.”

Miss Lusk reached daintily into her bosom and withdrew a small roll of paper banknotes of which she peeled off a single one mark note and held it out.  Mr. Parnorsham looked at it for a long moment as if not sure whether it was appropriate for him to touch something that had just come from within a young woman’s garments.  Finally he took it by the very corner and carrying it carefully, as though he thought it might spontaneously combust, he placed it in the cash box, and withdrew three copper pfennigs change, which, now overwhelmed by the idea of more intimate physical contact, he placed on the counter instead of in Miss Lusk’s hand.

He turned around and pulled two Billingbow’s from the ice box and set them next to the other purchases and then turned his attention to Senta.

“Five P.”

Egeria Lusk is a character who appears a relatively small amount in each of the books, but is never the less important for the plot.  She was in part inspired by the historic Ada Lovelace and Lovelace was her name in the draft.  She's also sort of a combination of two of my favorite aunts.

Sunday, March 25, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Mr. Darwin



“Hello Mr. Darwin.”

“Oh hello, Senta,” said the bespectacled older man, who was only slightly taller than the ten year old girl.  “How are you this cold morning?”

“I’m okay.  Which of these buildings is going to be yours?”

“This one right here,” he replied, pointing to the left most of the two having their roofs put on.  “I’m right next to Mr. Parnorsham’s Pfennig Store.  I think that’s the best spot in the square.  Don’t you?”

“I kind of thought you would have moved in there when Mrs. Wachtel died,” said Senta, indicating the shop just to the left of the Pfennig Store.

“Yes, well… to be honest, when Mrs. Wachtel… a…  passed away,” Mr. Darwin crossed himself.  “I had already signed the paperwork.”

“So what are they going to do with her place?”

“It’s my understanding that Mrs. Bratihn is going to take over the business.”

“I guess that will be good since her husband can’t work on account of being blind.”

“Mmm,” nodded Mr. Darwin, noncommittally while he took off his glasses to wipe them with a clean handkerchief.

“I didn’t expect Mrs. Government to let us go too long without a dress shop.”

Mr. Darwin bit his lower lip.  “Senta, you are irrepressible.  You are going to have to learn to watch what you say.”

Mr. Darwin is a very minor character.  He is of course named for Charles Darwin.  I just thought it would be great to have the man who made things from dinosaur skin be named Darwin.

Saturday, March 24, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Zurfina


Zurfina is the sorceress and mistress of Senta in the Senta and the Steel Dragon.  She appears fairly frequently in Book 2: The Dark and Forbidding Land.  This is also the last book in which she really has control over Senta, at least as a parent has control over a child.

In real life, nobody would want Zurfina as a parent, but she is very fun to write.  Her total lack of parental nature makes her unusual.

Excerpt:


“Why is my house infested with children?” the sorceress demanded, though exactly to whom she was speaking was unclear.  “Why aren’t you all out playing in the snow?  It was my understanding that children adore it.”

“The tyrannosaurus is out there,” said Senta.

“Well if it attacks, you simply run in four different directions.  That way you have at least a seventy five percent chance of getting away.”

“Unless he can hop from one to the other of us,” said Senta.  “I doubt he would be as hindered by the snow as we would be.”

“Then perhaps you’ve made a good decision,” said Zurfina and headed up the staircase in the center of the room.  “Wake me for dinner, Pet.”

“Is she serious?” wondered Graham.

“About dinner?”

“No.  About us playing when the tyrannosaurus is about.”

Senta shrugged.  “You know she almost let me get eaten by velociraptors once.”

Friday, March 23, 2012

Spelling Typos & Other Infernal Errors


I've been getting too much negative criticism about typos of recent.  On the one hand it is because more people are reading my books, but it is also because there are a few typos creeping in there.  Needless to say, I find it very embarrassing to have an error in my books.  I have a fairly loyal cadre of beta readers and I use several tools to find things like incorrect homophone usage, but errors still creep in .  Consequently, I'm looking into a professional editor.  If there is any economic feasibility (if I can afford it) I'm going to hire one.  I've already paid for some professional covers.  I suppose this is the next step in getting a first class story out there.

Thursday, March 22, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Hero and Hertzal



Hero and Hertzel are two characters in the Senta and the Steel Dragon series.  They are twins and Senta's best friends.  Both arrived in Birmisia colony shortly after Senta from Freedonia, where they escaped persecution for being members of the Zaeri minority.  They along with Senta and her boyfriend Graham form a quartet of (in this book) ten year olds.  The twins lost their parents in Freedonia and now live with their older sister Honor.

I don't know where the idea for these two characters popped up.  They, like so many characters in this series, just seemed to fit.  Senta needed a best girlfriend and it seemed natural to have a male friend for Graham as well.  Of the two, Hertzal is a much more interesting character because he never speaks.  This is a result of a trauma in Freedonia.  This makes him a more difficult character to write too, but he really comes into his own in this book.

I have always wanted to name a female character Hero, since seeing and reading Much Ado About Nothing.  Hertzal, I looked up, searching for something that sounded good with Hero.

Wednesday, March 21, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Bessemer


One of the main things about the series of Senta and the Steel Dragon, is the steel dragon himself.  He changes from book to book.  In book 1, he's not much bigger than a house cat and is treated generally like a pet.  By book 3, he's somewhat larger than a pony, speaks several languages fluently, and is a real part of the story.  By book 5, he is pretty close to the size of a steam train engine.

In the Dark and Forbidding Land, he is a bit bigger than the average family dog, and is starting to communicate in words.  He's not really a character yet, like he is in book 3, but I had a lot of fun with him.  He's perhaps a bit more mischievous and dangerous at this age than he is when he is older and can actually think about what he is doing.

Tuesday, March 20, 2012

Movie Books: A Princess of Mars (John Carter)


There are about a thousand different paper editions of Edgar Rice Burroughs' John Carter series and there are almost as many ebook editions.  Probably the best was put together with loving care by ebook lover HarryT at Mobile Read Forums.  He has painstaikingly crafted a single volume with all eleven Barsoom novels together.  You don't have to be a Mobile Read member to get it, but Mobile Read is definitely worth your time.  Here is a link to the ebook:

http://www.mobileread.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=34895&d=1251219101

Monday, March 19, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Graham Dokkins


As I mentioned the other day, Graham comes into his own in book 2.  Graham really is a hero, even as a kid.  How many ten year olds are willing to stand up to a pair of utahraptors.

Graham carefully aimed down the length of the barrel.  He squeezed the trigger, but nothing happened.  Lowering the weapon, he flipped the safety to the fire position, and then sighted again.  This time when he fired there was a satisfying crack.  The utahraptors stopped, startled, for a moment, but seemed uninjured.  Graham worked the action and fired again.  This time Senta saw the bullet strike the trunk of a massive redwood about twenty feet above the ground and quite a bit behind the predators.

“It’s not sited in right,” muttered Graham, as he pulled back the bolt.

This time, as with the first shot, they were unable to determine where the missile hit.

“Um, aim at their feet and a bit to the right of them,” advised Senta.

This time the bullet hit a tree just to the right of the foremost creature.

“The next one is in your head!” called Graham as if he had intended the previous shots as warnings. 

The utahraptor did not look at all impressed.  He and his cohort were not much more than fifty feet away.  When they charged they could clear that distance in the blink of an eye.  For the moment though they were still being wary of the strange little creatures which made loud booming noises and refused to run.

“You better stand behind me,” said Graham bravely.

Sunday, March 18, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land: Senta


I screwed up.  I started talking about the characters in The Drache Girl and went right by The Dark and Forbidding Land-- probably because I wrote The Drache Girl first.  So, I'll switch gears and talk about book two of the series and then go back and finish book 3.

Senta is the first person to appear in book 2.  In fact, in both book 2 and book 3, the four friends-- Senta, Graham, Hero, and Hertzal-- are the first characters.  These two books, unlike the others, have a kind of Harry Potter feeling to them as the four friends are together throughout most of the story and play a key role in the plot.  In book 1 of course, the four of them meet for the first time, and although all appear in books 4 and 5, they aren't together in the same way.

In The Dark and Forbidding Land, Senta is ten years old-- she has her 11th birthday just after the story ends.  She's precotious, but not as confident as she will be.  On the other hand, she's not too afraid to stand up to Zurfina, not that she was even in book 1.  She's learning all about magic and reveals that she has potential even beyond her guardian.

Also in this book, Senta comes into contact with the Reine Zauberei for the first time.  They are the Freedonian wizards whose racism has poisoned their country for the Zaeri.  The play a much bigger part in books 4 and 5.

Saturday, March 17, 2012

John Carter


As I write this, I just finished watching John Carter.  It was a fantastic movie, but then I'm prejudiced.  I first read a Princess of Mars 41 years ago and it became a part of me.  Edgar Rice Burroughs influenced my writing of course, but he and his character John Carter influenced my outlook on life too.  This really is a story for the ages, one that has been copied again and again.

I thought the movie did a good job of bringing the book to life.  There were some changes in the story and a few elements were brought in from book two of the series, but for the most part, they were understandable changes, keeping today's movie-goer in mind.  The actors were all believable in their roles, the special effects were top-notch, and the story-telling pace was good.

I would recommend this movie to anyone, but you really should read the books.  They are great.

Incidentally, I went with my wife, daughter, and son-- the first movie the whole family has been together for, for more than a year.  We saw it in 3-D.  Despite it all costing an arm and a leg for us to have an evening together, it was very nice.

Friday, March 16, 2012

Update: The Young Sorceress


I just finished the first draft for The Young Sorceress.  It clocks in at 65,000 words, which makes it the shortest book in the series (with the exception of book 0), but I think there are a few chapters I need to add to flesh out the story a bit.   I feel pretty good about it.  Chapters 11-14 really came together well.

This has been the most difficult of the series to write.  At times I felt like I was running out of steam for the series.  I love the characters and the setting, but after I finish book 5, I'm going to take a long break before I write any more. 

Watch this spot.  I'll let you know when I finish the first revision.  In the meantime, here is the chapter list as it stands now.

1. Spring
2. The Blond Girl
3. Nellie Swenson
4. Birthday
5. Birthday Part II
6. The Real Senta
7. Predators
8. Gods
9. Sorceresses and Witch Doctors
10. The Two Sentas
11. Pirates and Princesses
12. The End
13. Mallontah and Hell
14. All Your Fault

Thursday, March 15, 2012

The World of Senta and the Steel Dragon


I have a huge notebook filled with maps of Senta's world.  Many of them are political maps of different times in the world's history.  Others cover parts of the world which do not appear in the series (though they might in a subsequent series).  Here is the part of the world where our story takes place.

Sumir is a fully settled continent that I usually think of as my stand-in for Europe, though as you can see, geographically it is quite different.  Greater Brechalon, Mirsanna, and Freedonia are the most powerful kingdoms.  You can think of them as stand-ins for Britain, France, and Germany.  Zur was once the seat of an empire that covered the continent, but is now relatively insignificant.  Argrathia is an even older society, now surviving off its history.  They are akin to Italy and Egypt.  Arbrax and the northern islands are sparcely inhabited and quite cold.

The northern half of the map is temperate to arctic, though due to ocean currents and possibly magic, Enclep and the southern part of the Mullien Islands are tropical.

Mallon is a huge landmass.  When I imagine it, I think of Asia, with Birmisia being China and Mallontah being India, at least as far as climate goes.  As far as populations, they are more like North America and Central America at the time of European contact, if the Americans had been cold-blooded reptiles.  The aborigines of Birmisa are different than those of Mallontah, though they are both reptilian.  The lizzies of Birmisia are taller, stronger, and more alien to humans.  Those in Mallontah have been completely subjugated by man and fill the slums of crowded human-controlled cities.

Wednesday, March 14, 2012

My Den Nearing Completion



I am writing this from my new den.  I've been working on it for weeks.  It was originally my den, then became my daughters bedroom for about 18 years, now it's my den again.  I am so happy.  Everything in it is used (or recycled). My mother gave me the chair when she bought a new one.  My son and I got the desk when a neighbor was throwing it away.  But it's still all mine.

Tuesday, March 13, 2012

7,000 Books Sold


7,000 books sold to date!  My 7,000th book sold sometime in February.  As you know, more than 5,000 of those books were His Robot Wife.  It's really interesting that in some bookstores one book will sell well and another book will sell well in other stores.  Tesla's Stepdaughter sells better at Apple, and Women of Power sells better at Barnes & Noble.  Funny, no?

Monday, March 12, 2012

February Book Sales



The February Sales are in and I sold 344 books during the course of the month.  I was actually feeling a bit antsy, because there weren't any sales reported right up until the 28th.  Thankfully the report came in and I could breathe a sigh of relief.  Sales were a bit off from the previous month, but for some reason, Feb. is an off month for books in general.

Sunday, March 11, 2012

His Robot Wife : 5,000 Sold



Obviously this is a big deal for me.  5,000 copies of His Robot Wife have been sold as of sometime in February.  Sales have slowed a bit, but it still selling better than my other books.  Hopefully when I have His Robot Wife: Patience is a Virtue done, sales will hop a bit more.  In the meantime, thanks to everyone who purchased my book.

Saturday, March 10, 2012

The Drache Girl on Sale


As part of Read an Ebook Week, The Drache Girl is on sale at Smashwords for $2.24.  Be sure to use coupon code REW25 to get the sale price.  Follow this link: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/19309 .  I hope everyone had a great Read an Ebook Week.

Friday, March 9, 2012

The Voyage of the Minotaur on Sale


I mentioned the other day that I am dropping the price of Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 1: The Voyage of the Minotaur to $1.99, but this week during Read and Ebook Week, you can pick up a copy at Smashwords for 99 cents.  Be sure to use coupon code REW50 to get the sale price.  Follow this link:
http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/11536

Thursday, March 8, 2012

The Dark and Forbidding Land on Sale


As part of Read an Ebook Week, The Dark and Forbidding Land (Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 2) is on sale at Smashwords for $1.50.  Be sure to use coupon code REW50 to get the sale price.  Follow this link: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/18903 .

Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Blood Trade on Sale


In celebration of Read an Ebook Week, Blood Trade is on sale at Smashwords.  You can pick up your copy in any popular ebook format for $2.24.  Be sure to use coupon code REW25 to get the sale price.
Follow this link: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/86413 .

Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike: Free


In celebration of Read an Ebook Week, please feel free to pick up your free copy of Astrid Maxxim and her Amazing Hoverbike.  You can find it here: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/102618.  Be sure to use coupon code DG97A to get yours for free.

Monday, March 5, 2012

The Voyage of the Minotaur is now $1.99


I am dropping the price of Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 1: The Voyage of the Minotaur to $1.99.  I have been struggling to decide a price point on this book and this series.  I want people to read it and I hope this will make it more attractive.

The book has been out almost exactly two years now, and as I write this, it has sold 259 copies.  I think that definitely warrents a price reduction.  By going below 2.99 at Amazon, I drop from a 70% royalty rate to a 30% royalty rate, and I don't really expect the additional sales to make up for it.  But hopefully there will be an increase in the sales of the sequels, and that will make up the difference.

If you have read my other books, but haven't yet gotten to Senta and the Steel Dragon, give them a try.  They are my favorite books of all those that I've written.

Sunday, March 4, 2012

Happy Read an Ebook Week


Today marks the beginning of Read an Ebook Week.  In celebration of the week, I am changing the price of Senta and the Steel Dragon Book 0: Brechalon from 99 cents to $0.  This is not a limited time thing, but is a permanent change. 

I will have to remove Book 0 from Amazon, as they will not allow me to distribute free books, but I am uploading it to Feedbooks.com.  This along with the other stores which distribute it, should give everyone a chance to find it.

Book 0 was actually intended as Bonus material anyway, so this puts it right where it should have been all the time.  I'm going to provide links to the download in the other books of the series.  If you purchased Book 0, and paid 99 cents for it, send me an email or leave a post here, and when book 4 comes out (very soon) I will send you a coupon code for it.

Saturday, March 3, 2012

The Drache Girl: Graham Dokkins


Graham Dokkins is one of the major characters in the Senta and the Steel Dragon series.  Graham sort of came into his own in Book 2, but he remains extremely important in book 3.  Several plot lines revolve around him and his relationship with Senta.  Graham really compliments Senta and they work well together as a couple, even though they are kids.

One of the things that I've been struggling with is how much Graham appears in Book 4, which isn't much.  In the rewrite, I think I'll add a bit more of him.

Friday, March 2, 2012

The Drache Girl: Bessemer


It was the size of a small pony, covered in scales the color of polished steel.  Every step it took was a study in grace, and from the tip of its whiskered snout, past its folded wings, to the tip of its barbed tail, it seemed to just flow along.
“They look as though they’ve never seen a dragon before,” said the dragon.

Bessemer the dragon appears more in The Drache Girl than any other book in the series.  He is right there on the first page, and what's more, he's grown up enough to talk.  He's a regular character in his own right.  Part of the story of the series is his growth of course, but I found him particularly fun to write in this book.

Thursday, March 1, 2012

The Drache Girl: Senta Bly


Senta Bly is the title character for the Senta and the Steel Dragon series of fantasy books.  In The Drache Girl, book 3 of the series, she is twelve years old and has finally come into her own a bit.  In this book more than any of the others, we see Senta as a kid, with friends who adventure with her around the town of Port Dechantagne.

Spoiler Alert:

Though Senta is really quite a powerful sorceress at this point, people aren't too afraid of her yet.  This is a major theme of books 4 and 5.  People know her and know not to cross her.  At least the people of Port Dechantagne do, and some visitors learn this during the course of the story.

Senta at age twelve was inspired by a string of skinny blond girls who came and went in my class.  One in particular came to school one day with her face all skinned up, and that inspired one of the chapters in this book.